A song that I wrote. I think I'll call it, "Where did it go wrong."

[♪kyЯ~ö_x~]

(Verse 1)
The sound of the rains, blocks out all the noises.
You take a breath and let it out so quickly.
How did it turn out like this, can we fix this damaged?

Your brown eyes wide open, pleading for me to stay.
You’re a sacrifice. My only mistake.
That one single tear just evanesces away.... away....

(chorus)
How did it come to this?!
What did we end up doing?
Why isn’t she breathing?! Why isn’t she breathing?!
Come back to me.
I’ll promise I’ll restore this!
Why isn’t she breathing?! Why isn’t she breathing?!

( verse 2)
I know your scared, and your probably wondering,
“why didn’t she save me’ (why didn’t you save me?)
Please understand, I love you forever, and that will change.

You know your feeling guilty, but don’t take it out me.
Open your eyes, and see the solution.
We were meant to be, for always and forever, but this isn’t a simple ending....

( chorus)
I kiss her on the lips, but I didn’t get any respond!
How come she isn’t feeling? How come she isn’t feeling?!
Why are the white coats leaving in a hurry?!
Why isn’t she breathing?! Why isn’t she breathing?!

( bridge)
Oh, heaven shine light a upon’ us.( On Us)
Let your rain, wash our sins away. ( away)
I’ll be your sacrifice, and she will be my guardian angel.
I lover her and she loves me, please, don’t take that away.
I understand the mistakes we had made, but were only human..

( chorus)
How did it end up like this?! What did we end up forgetting ?!
Why isn’t she breathing?! Why isn’t she breathing?!
Why are the Bells ringing so loudly?! (quiet..)
why isn’t she breathing?! Why isn’t she breathing?!
Where is the love and happiness that we promise?! ( broken)
Why aren’t they breathing?!!! Why aren’t they breathing...BREATHING?!!!!

[Matt-Has-Gone-Back-In-Time-]

Wow......that is very very good!!!!! no no no!! not good!!! it was....................................................................................FUCKING BRILLIENT!!!!!!!!!OMG!!! YOU WROTE THAT!!!!!IT HAD SO MUCH EMOTION IN IT!!!!!!! IM SO SORRY IM SWEARING AND SHOUTING OK ILL STOP......im stopping, lemme ask, was that dedicated to anyone? im sorry if its none of my buisness!

[♪kyЯ~ö_x~]

thanx!
I don't mind the swearing.....it was pretty hot. lol
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well, it can be dedicated 2 someone. but someone may can relate 2 this. =-)

[Matt-Has-Gone-Back-In-Time-]

awwww, hehe i have kno idea y i said that, hehe, shit its past my bedroom...it 1 in the morning....

[♪kyЯ~ö_x~]

lol
Go 2 bed, cookie-ness!

if not, u'll get those bangs Like L, underneath ur eyes.

I would give u another cookie, but I gave u like..2 all ready.

[Matt-Has-Gone-Back-In-Time-]

...so...can i have another cookie? pwittie pweeze?? with headless gummy bears and a cheery on top? hehe

[♪kyЯ~ö_x~]

headless gummy bears? 0_o

*gives u a cookie*

ur goin' be SOOOOOO hyper. =-)

[Matt-Has-Gone-Back-In-Time-]

hehe, yay!

[♪kyЯ~ö_x~]

*sign*
now, I'm out of cookies...oh well! singing time!!

"Every little thing that you say or do
I'm hung up
I'm hung up on you
Waiting for your call
baby night and day
I'm fed up
I'm tired of waiting on you' lol

[mimiko09]

its good!!
HOW DID YOU do that!!!????

[♪kyЯ~ö_x~]

thz!!! *bows*
uh..um...how I did that? well,...I type

[Keniko Mastuvi]

oh sissy i love it it makes me cry! oh how about< Where did it go wrong >that could be a good title i love it show it to kattie

[uchiha princess''^_~'']

WOW!!!!!!!!!THAT WAS REALLY GR8!!UR A GENIUS!terribly touching... it made me cry.! ......umm ...abt the title...i lyked the other one better--''where did it go wrong''.....but still u cud combine both.. something lyk ''the breath that went wrong ''or something lyk that..